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Good start. Look please at the checklist copied and pasted from Modules on P1…

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Good start.
Look please at the checklist copied and pasted from Modules on P1…
Make editing and proofreading changes and resubmit, please.
Examples?
edits:
use the required set up for the thesis that you find in the optional assignments for P1
delete “one’s” to use Gatsby instead to make this more to the point
make your thesis point clear and simpler THEN restate it exactly in different words in your conclusion…
proofread:
dream not Dream
use
First,
Second,
Third,
for the three body PPs that must be 20 sentences each, for a total sentence count for the body of 60 seentences
In summary, is missing.  3 sentences covering the three body PPs
In conclusion,
is missing=a restatement of the thesis
page numbering
title of your paper
dream not Dream
always italicize the title of the novel
never put it in single quotes: ‘The Great Gatsby’
in-text citation=edit and revise each one:
p2 examples show how editing can make these great citations effective
For example:
Carraway makes the remark about the rich, that “they came East richer together” (6).
This is a combination of editing to make your citation directly support a point that you are making.  AND
that you get it correctly punctuated.
Write to me whenever you have a question about how to do this technically or effectively.
Robert Sprague , Sep 28 at 5:22pm
of course you want
Mckibbins 1
Mckibbins 2
you do not want
LastName 1
Robert Sprague , Sep 28 at 5:23pm
here is the checklist that I copied and pasted from the Modules on P1:
checklist:
Formatting
MLA page format:
___does your paper meet MLA standards for formatting?
Note: see Modules “Supplement: Background on MLA Page Formatting and MLA Citing Appropriate Sourcing for All Four of Your Papers—especially “Background MLA General Formatting Requirements”
Organization and Development
___Alignment among your paper’s title, thesis sentence, and conclusion;
PP1: ___does it use the required thesis sentence set up (F. Scott Fitzgerald’s The Great Gatsby [italicized or underlined])? …;
___does it use the phrase “the American dream” [once you use “the American dream,” use “the dream,” “it” (if “it” is clear), “vision,” “ideal”;
___does it mention Jay Gatsby [using first and last name the the first time and only time you introduce him or any other character—from then on you may use one name, as in Gatsby]
___is there alignment among your paper’s title, thesis, and conclusion?
___is the thesis clear with one main idea (probably avoid the use of “and” or other conjunctive words that make compound ideas when you need one main idea
PP2 (___about 20 sentences):
___does it use: “First,”;
___is it a clear, single topic sentence that connects to the thesis and leads to the conclusion?;
___is it about the American dream in general terms
PP3 (___about 20 sentences):
___ ”Second,”;
___is it a clear second topic sentence that connects to the thesis and leads to the conclusion?;
___is it about the dream and some element of the novel?;
PP4 (___about 20 sentences):
___“Third,”;
___is it a third topic sentence that connects to the thesis and leads to the conclusion?;
___is it about the dream and characters in the novel, probably emphasizing Gatsby but discussing three characters
___delete all contractions (won’t, doesn’t, can’t, as examples) and all personal pronouns (I, you, we, our, etc., as examples)
___are words capitalized correctly: Daisy v daisy, The Great Gatsby (italicized) v the great Gatsby?
for the two required quotes:
Organization and Transitions
___MLA-mandated signal phrases;
___in-text citations;
___Works Cited
___Outline as last page=remember your outline
MLA
Use two quotes from the novel with required MLA formatting.
Use a MLA Works Cited page
Use MLA page formatting
Use MLA in-text citations
Delete comment: Your paper looks well done! PP2 of the body for examples reads very well…. Organization Development Transitions Good control of the topic over three different ways to develop it. Please take a look at the Modules, the one on Check list for Paper 1. Go through your paper with the check list and make editing and proofreading changes. Examples? Works Cited page Missing “In conclusion, missing in-text citations small points: dream not Dream spell numbers: three not 3 etc. checklist: Formatting MLA page format: ___does your paper meet MLA standards for formatting?  Note: see Modules “Supplement: Background on MLA Page Formatting and MLA Citing Appropriate Sourcing for All Four of Your Papers—especially “Background MLA General Formatting Requirements” Organization and Development ___Alignment among your paper’s title, thesis sentence, and conclusion; PP1: ___does it use the required thesis sentence set up (F. Scott Fitzgerald’s The Great Gatsby [italicized or underlined])? …; ___does it use the phrase “the American dream” [once you use “the American dream,” use “the dream,” “it” (if “it” is clear), “vision,” “ideal”; ___does it mention Jay Gatsby [using first and last name the the first time and only time you introduce him or any other character—from then on you may use one name, as in Gatsby] ___is there alignment among your paper’s title, thesis, and conclusion? ___is the thesis clear with one main idea (probably avoid the use of “and” or other conjunctive words that make compound ideas when you need one main idea PP2 (___about 20 sentences): ___does it use: “First,”; ___is it a clear, single topic sentence that connects to the thesis and leads to the conclusion?; ___is it about the American dream in general terms PP3 (___about 20 sentences): ___ ”Second,”; ___is it a clear second topic sentence that connects to the thesis and leads to the conclusion?; ___is it about the dream and some element of the novel?; PP4 (___about 20 sentences): ___“Third,”; ___is it a third topic sentence that connects to the thesis and leads to the conclusion?; ___is it about the dream and characters in the novel, probably emphasizing Gatsby but discussing three characters ___delete all contractions (won’t, doesn’t, can’t, as examples) and all personal pronouns (I, you, we, our, etc., as examples) ___are words capitalized correctly: Daisy v daisy, The Great Gatsby (italicized) v the great Gatsby? for the two required quotes: Organization and Transitions ___MLA-mandated signal phrases; ___in-text citations; ___Works Cited ___Outline as last page=remember your outline MLA Use two quotes from the novel with required MLA formatting. Use a MLA Works Cited page Use MLA page formatting Use MLA in-text citations
Robert Sprague , Sep 28 at 5:23pm
double space the entire paper
italicize the title of the novel

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